Revision #2

When we presented to the class we got some feed back on our film which consisted of the comments that in our dialogue scene the characters say to much which gives away to much of the plot. After talking it over with my group we decided on taking out the meeting all together and just have the two couples talk to one another about the other couple. They will eventually meet towards the end of the film but not in the beginning that we have to make. We decided to just add a shot conversation with the young couple in their car before they decided to go into the store to buy food for dinner.

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